We have come down to two final ideas that we have decided to leave till we discuss with Matt and Luke. Both of our final ideas ended up being Ashen's ideas
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[MAIN CHARACTER]
16-17 years old, appears to be good looking, appears social extroverted, clean,
average, not too tall, too small. Average build. White Caucasian, male, edgy,
casual trendy clothing.
• Extras can wear
there normal attire.
• [BUS DRIVER], is in
bus driver uniform. In his mid 40s
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• Alec
• Ben Radcliffe
• [BUS DRIVER] Remi
• 7 EXTRA
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• Bus stop in
Cranleigh
• In the bus moving
on the way to school
• Generic state
school, building block
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• [MAIN CHARACTER]
Early twenties, dark medium length, fairly tall, stocky but not fat, clean cut, defined look,
smart trendy clothes, suited up.
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Ashen's first idea - My first idea is a story of a young
American boy who has struggled with his education. He sort of a class clown, a
well-liked character. For example he looks for trouble, as he pressures his
friend to take his Dad’s guns with him, but all they do is check them out,
however our main character is seen to love the power. However this time he gets
down to work, he spends hours and hours revising for his final exams. However
he finds the more time he spends isolated and separate from society to study,
the more and more introverted he becomes. After his exams his mother worries
about his social awkwardness and his constant sadness, so she takes him to a
doctor. He is prescribed Prozac, an antidepressant drug. However everything
because becomes black and white, as he becomes sedated by the drug the more his
empathy decreases. He is unable to relate to people. In his frustration he
slips down a road of despair. He begins to identify with the columbine shooters
and other school shooting Prozac victims. He begins modelling their behavior,
he is new twisted negative whirlwind of an idea becomes his new hobby. He
begins making cheap homemade bombs. Then he goes back to his dads pistols. The
story is concluded by the boy walking into school armed with two
semi-automatics.
Now the opening title sequences for this piece would be very
similar to the style of Kyle Coopers opening to Se7en. The music/sound used
throughout the piece would have to be very influential and unnerving. What the
opening title sequence would show would be, video of excessive writing, then
video of a young boy swallowing pills. There would be a lot of cuts, for
example of the Prozac bottles, and then the swallowing of the pills. Then the
googling of guns, the columbine shootings, and similar activities. Building
interest and intrigue.
DEVELOPMENTS…This idea developed could start with him going
to the school with the guns. And the rest of the film would show his Tyranny
and act within the school lunch hall, while he gets flashbacks to what got him
to that place. Every time he gets a flashback he takes another pill. So he
begins to puke, and once the medication is out his system he can’t live within
himself knowing what he has done. His humanity has come back. He regrets
everything. He begins running through the canteen shouting ‘I am sorry… I’m
sorry’ as tears stream down his face, he grabs one of the students as a
hostages, and takes him outside with him, where he is confronted by the police.
He throws her to the ground and pulls out his empty pistol as he is shot to
death.
The opening sequence for this would consist of the boy, on
his way to school, on the school bus. All the activity around him is ecstatic,
however he sits calm and collected. He goes through his bag school bag and the
audience gets glimpses of what looks like to be just some metal objects and
some highlighted pieces of papers on the columbine shootings. He pulls out a
tub of Prozac and pops a pill. Then there are a few pop shots of the pill being
swallowed and then everything desaturates to a black and white. Everyone leaves
the bus as he solemnly sits on the bus, he grabs his stuff in a controlled
manner and walks towards the school. Cuts to titles.
The opening title sequence to this idea would be the CEO,
narrating his daily lifestyle, him walking the audience through his experience
every day. While he through out the statistics of people who die by care
accidents, compared to the minority of people who die from drugs, however the
government do not care to make vehicles more safe due to the corporations
lobbying for the government. We finally end the title sequence with the CEO
saying how he still wants more of this lavish lifestyle.
Ashen's second idea - My second idea is of a CEO for Ford,
who indirectly kills thousands a year due to the greed for more profit. The
basis of this story is how all who make up this corporation are aware of their
damage upon the people, however they don't care to accept responsibility. He
lives the high life, while thousands of deaths compensate for his own gain.
However after a while his Ford goes under investigation, and he begins to loses
his sh*t. The audience believes that at last he is going to get what he
deserves. However at the last minute he gets to escape the system. And only
needs to spend three months away in another country (pretty much go on holiday)
and the authorities can’t get him
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